First Draft Feedback:
Positives:
- I think the effects you have played around with are really effect and present a clear message of this person that has been lost.
- I love the variation of camera angles and the pace of your shots is really good as well.
- The beginning lip sync is really good and starts the song in an engaging way.
- I like your choice of ending Harry - your character is in the same position as the start and the fade out of lights is an effective metaphor in keeping with the song.
Areas for improvement:
- Look at the lipsync in the concert shots. Some of them are out of time.
- Fill in the gaps with your time lapse idea etc.
- There is red eye in some of the night scenes and the concert scenes that would be worth addressing for a more professional look.
Things to consider:
- The opening shot with the paper doesn't seem to fit with the bright colour of the bedding - have a look at how you could rework this or change the colour saturation so that it looks more continuous.
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