Thursday, 29 March 2018

Wednesday, 28 March 2018

Analysis - QUESTION 2

Sunday, 25 March 2018

Tuesday, 13 March 2018

Wednesday, 28 February 2018

Digipak Draft

This is the first draft of my digipak I believe that I would like to keep working on the inside
panels as they seem very plain and I want to make the text in the CD panel clearer.

Poster First Draft

This is my first draft of my poster I believe that the text on the bottom of the poster is too bland
and boring and I would like to experiment with more fonts to see what I like best I also dislike the
positioning of the album title. Finally I would like to look at the posibility of using a different image
perhaps a full body one however still use the same effect.

Wednesday, 21 February 2018

Plumtree

Harry, the video is coming on really nicely and your post-production additions are really effective and adding to the overall impact of the video. Yes, the lip-syncing still needs work and you are aware of this, so try to get it amended as soon as possible. Where it is in time it looks very professional and this therefore highlights where it is not quite in sync.

I was hoping to see your digipak and poster posted as well and I am a bit disappointed that they are both missing, especially as I have seen you working on them in class. Get these posted as a matter of urgency!

Friday, 9 February 2018

Music video second draft

My music video however I will go back to fix the few errors in lipsync and correct the colour grade as it caused some issues in the video.

Sunday, 4 February 2018

Saturday, 13 January 2018

Digipak/Poster design development

This ws my first test on creating the effect I want to have for my digipak
and poster I like how it looks but I have decided to use a smoke effect instead
of broken glass

Wednesday, 10 January 2018

Thursday, 4 January 2018

JONES


First Draft Feedback: 

Positives: 
  • I think the effects you have played around with are really effect and present a clear message of this person that has been lost. 
  • I love the variation of camera angles and the pace of your shots is really good as well. 
  • The beginning lip sync is really good and starts the song in an engaging way.
  • I like your choice of ending Harry - your character is in the same position as the start and the fade out of lights is an effective metaphor in keeping with the song.  

Areas for improvement:
  • Look at the lipsync in the concert shots. Some of them are out of time. 
  • Fill in the gaps with your time lapse idea etc. 
  • There is red eye in some of the night scenes and the concert scenes that would be worth addressing for a more professional look. 

Things to consider: 
  • The opening shot with the paper doesn't seem to fit with the bright colour of the bedding - have a look at how you could rework this or change the colour saturation so that it looks more continuous.