Thursday, 29 March 2018
Wednesday, 28 March 2018
Tuesday, 27 March 2018
Sunday, 25 March 2018
Tuesday, 13 March 2018
Wednesday, 28 February 2018
Digipak Draft
Poster First Draft
Wednesday, 21 February 2018
Plumtree
Harry, the video is coming on really nicely and your post-production additions are really effective and adding to the overall impact of the video. Yes, the lip-syncing still needs work and you are aware of this, so try to get it amended as soon as possible. Where it is in time it looks very professional and this therefore highlights where it is not quite in sync.
I was hoping to see your digipak and poster posted as well and I am a bit disappointed that they are both missing, especially as I have seen you working on them in class. Get these posted as a matter of urgency!
I was hoping to see your digipak and poster posted as well and I am a bit disappointed that they are both missing, especially as I have seen you working on them in class. Get these posted as a matter of urgency!
Friday, 9 February 2018
Music video second draft
Sunday, 4 February 2018
Saturday, 13 January 2018
Digipak/Poster design development
Wednesday, 10 January 2018
Thursday, 4 January 2018
JONES
First Draft Feedback:
Positives:
- I think the effects you have played around with are really effect and present a clear message of this person that has been lost.
- I love the variation of camera angles and the pace of your shots is really good as well.
- The beginning lip sync is really good and starts the song in an engaging way.
- I like your choice of ending Harry - your character is in the same position as the start and the fade out of lights is an effective metaphor in keeping with the song.
Areas for improvement:
- Look at the lipsync in the concert shots. Some of them are out of time.
- Fill in the gaps with your time lapse idea etc.
- There is red eye in some of the night scenes and the concert scenes that would be worth addressing for a more professional look.
Things to consider:
- The opening shot with the paper doesn't seem to fit with the bright colour of the bedding - have a look at how you could rework this or change the colour saturation so that it looks more continuous.
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